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Artyfaiz vs YonGun
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Artyfaiz vs YonGun
Artyfaiz:
YounGun:
Jury: Pertuba, Mindless, d4igo
-Suplentes: Darkclowner, Tazu
Format :
Participant 1
+ All the assets of the participant and what you think
- What you dislike and all the defaillances
Participant 2
+ All the assets of the participant and what you think
- What you dislike and all the defaillances
- Variations - Name Of Participant
- Style - Name Of Participant
- Beatriding - Name Of Participant
- Entertainment - Name Of Participant
- Cleanliness/Smoothness - Name Of Participant
Overall Vote - Name of Participant (you must choose one of them)
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YounGun:
Jury: Pertuba, Mindless, d4igo
-Suplentes: Darkclowner, Tazu
Format :
Participant 1
+ All the assets of the participant and what you think
- What you dislike and all the defaillances
Participant 2
+ All the assets of the participant and what you think
- What you dislike and all the defaillances
- Variations - Name Of Participant
- Style - Name Of Participant
- Beatriding - Name Of Participant
- Entertainment - Name Of Participant
- Cleanliness/Smoothness - Name Of Participant
Overall Vote - Name of Participant (you must choose one of them)
sebb1NN- Mensajes : 270
Reputación : 9
Fecha de inscripción : 22/05/2010
Edad : 28
Localización : Argentina / Chaco / Resistencia
Re: Artyfaiz vs YonGun
Artyfaiz
+ Even though you repeated some varies, you did innovate a lot, adding wow moves and more complex varies, well done. Nice beatride, you missed a few claps, but in general it was good.
- Work on your flow, you lock yourself in the transition from one step to another, mostly when you do a more difficult step. Also keep developing your style, i'm not saying it's bad, but it has a lot of shortcomings and errors, also it has to be more appealing to the eye of the viewer.
YounGun
+ Good flow, but you kinda messed it up by the end of the vid. Also really clean and smooth walk, nice .
- The style is too "flat" for me, it just dont get to me, nothing stood out in the whole video, not varies or style, it wast just flat. The varies were too basic, i didn't see anything new or even hard. Your beatride was too poor for a crowner, you missed a lot of claps.
- Variations - Artyfaiz
- Style - Both
- Beatriding - Artyfaiz
- Entertainment - Both
- Cleanliness/Smoothness - Youngun
Overall Vote - Artyfaiz
Reason: Artyfaiz showed a more developed crown walk, and a more entertaining and unique style to my eyes, even though both have a lot to work on.
+ Even though you repeated some varies, you did innovate a lot, adding wow moves and more complex varies, well done. Nice beatride, you missed a few claps, but in general it was good.
- Work on your flow, you lock yourself in the transition from one step to another, mostly when you do a more difficult step. Also keep developing your style, i'm not saying it's bad, but it has a lot of shortcomings and errors, also it has to be more appealing to the eye of the viewer.
YounGun
+ Good flow, but you kinda messed it up by the end of the vid. Also really clean and smooth walk, nice .
- The style is too "flat" for me, it just dont get to me, nothing stood out in the whole video, not varies or style, it wast just flat. The varies were too basic, i didn't see anything new or even hard. Your beatride was too poor for a crowner, you missed a lot of claps.
- Variations - Artyfaiz
- Style - Both
- Beatriding - Artyfaiz
- Entertainment - Both
- Cleanliness/Smoothness - Youngun
Overall Vote - Artyfaiz
Reason: Artyfaiz showed a more developed crown walk, and a more entertaining and unique style to my eyes, even though both have a lot to work on.
Mindless- Mensajes : 2
Reputación : 0
Fecha de inscripción : 25/06/2010
Re: Artyfaiz vs YonGun
Artifaiz
+ hiciste un gran video, tiene variaciones interesantes, lo que agrega entretencion, los wow movs. bien ejecutados y un ritmo bueno, aunque no perfecto, y un estilo agresivo, que segun mi parecer, puede seguir mejorando.
- El video es bastante completo, creo que falta qe mejores tu flow y relajarte un poco. Pareciera que estas demaciado tenso, porque se ve muy agresivo, en consecuencia, algo forzado.
YounGun
+ Lo que mas me llamo la atencion fue la exelente limpieza, tambien tienes un gran flow,variaciones algo normales. El ritmo estubo presente, pero no de la mejor manera.
- Creo que el video podria haber sido mucho mejor, considerando tu potencial. Creo que el cwalk tenia poca entretencion, ya que las variaciones eran bastante repetitivas y no tenian gran dificultad. El ritmo podria haber sido mucho, mucho mejor. Creo que podrias haber hecho un mejor trabajo.
- Variations - Artyfaiz
- Style - Both
- Beatriding - Artyfaiz
- Entertainment -Artyfaiz
- Cleanliness/Smoothness - Youngun
Overal Vote - Artyfaiz
Reason: Evidentemente hizo un video mucho mas completo. Reune mejor el formato que su oponente, y se destaca por variaciones creativas que aportan entretenimiento
+ hiciste un gran video, tiene variaciones interesantes, lo que agrega entretencion, los wow movs. bien ejecutados y un ritmo bueno, aunque no perfecto, y un estilo agresivo, que segun mi parecer, puede seguir mejorando.
- El video es bastante completo, creo que falta qe mejores tu flow y relajarte un poco. Pareciera que estas demaciado tenso, porque se ve muy agresivo, en consecuencia, algo forzado.
YounGun
+ Lo que mas me llamo la atencion fue la exelente limpieza, tambien tienes un gran flow,variaciones algo normales. El ritmo estubo presente, pero no de la mejor manera.
- Creo que el video podria haber sido mucho mejor, considerando tu potencial. Creo que el cwalk tenia poca entretencion, ya que las variaciones eran bastante repetitivas y no tenian gran dificultad. El ritmo podria haber sido mucho, mucho mejor. Creo que podrias haber hecho un mejor trabajo.
- Variations - Artyfaiz
- Style - Both
- Beatriding - Artyfaiz
- Entertainment -Artyfaiz
- Cleanliness/Smoothness - Youngun
Overal Vote - Artyfaiz
Reason: Evidentemente hizo un video mucho mas completo. Reune mejor el formato que su oponente, y se destaca por variaciones creativas que aportan entretenimiento
d4igone- Mensajes : 9
Reputación : 0
Fecha de inscripción : 10/11/2010
Re: Artyfaiz vs YonGun
Lol.. We dont understand... In english please
[CN1]Entony- Mensajes : 1
Reputación : 0
Fecha de inscripción : 25/10/2010
Re: Artyfaiz vs YonGun
TRANSLATION:
Artifaiz
+ You made a good video, you've got interesting varies, which adds entertainment, wow moves well executed and good beatride, but not perfect, and an agressive style, in my opinion, it can get better.
-The video is very complete, i believe you should work on your flow and relax a bit. It seems like you are very tense, because it looks very agressive, in consecuence, somewhat forced.
YounGun
+What called my attention a lot was your exelent clealiness, you've also got a great flow, somewhat normal varies. Beatridin was present, but it could ve been better.
- I think that your video could have been better, considering your potencial, I believe that your cwalk had little entertainment, because the varies were very repetetive and had no great difficulty. Your beatride could ve been way, way better. I guess that you could ve done a better job.
- Variations - Artyfaiz
- Style - Both
- Beatriding - Artyfaiz
- Entertainment -Artyfaiz
- Cleanliness/Smoothness - Youngun
Overal Vote - Artyfaiz
Reason: Evidently he made a much more complete video. It has got better format that his opponent's, and has creative varies that add entertainment.
Artifaiz
+ You made a good video, you've got interesting varies, which adds entertainment, wow moves well executed and good beatride, but not perfect, and an agressive style, in my opinion, it can get better.
-The video is very complete, i believe you should work on your flow and relax a bit. It seems like you are very tense, because it looks very agressive, in consecuence, somewhat forced.
YounGun
+What called my attention a lot was your exelent clealiness, you've also got a great flow, somewhat normal varies. Beatridin was present, but it could ve been better.
- I think that your video could have been better, considering your potencial, I believe that your cwalk had little entertainment, because the varies were very repetetive and had no great difficulty. Your beatride could ve been way, way better. I guess that you could ve done a better job.
- Variations - Artyfaiz
- Style - Both
- Beatriding - Artyfaiz
- Entertainment -Artyfaiz
- Cleanliness/Smoothness - Youngun
Overal Vote - Artyfaiz
Reason: Evidently he made a much more complete video. It has got better format that his opponent's, and has creative varies that add entertainment.
Krown- Mensajes : 89
Reputación : 3
Fecha de inscripción : 23/05/2010
Localización : BsAs Mtz
Re: Artyfaiz vs YonGun
Artyfaiz
- primero me encanta esa cancion ^^
- tu primer paron siguiendo el lyric me guspo mucho
- alomejor falto mejor ejecucion en alguna transicion
- gran variedad de movimientos alguno k otro original
- los kneedrop del final con esa transicion entre medias fue impresionante
- energia ok
- un gran upperbody que le da fuerza y espresividad a tu walk
YounGun
- el principio no me convencio mucho
- 0:48 - 0:53 lyric (L)
- un video bastante sencillo no me impresiono mucho
- tienes algun que otro movimiento bastante tuyo
- un estilo fluido y limpio
- podias averle dao un poco mas de juego con upperbody
- energia ok
- Variations - Artyfaiz
- Style - artyfaiz/youngun
- Beatriding - Artyfaiz
- Entertainment -Artyfaiz
- Cleanliness/Smoothness - Youngun
vote : artyfaiz (more entertainment/and overal better walk)
- primero me encanta esa cancion ^^
- tu primer paron siguiendo el lyric me guspo mucho
- alomejor falto mejor ejecucion en alguna transicion
- gran variedad de movimientos alguno k otro original
- los kneedrop del final con esa transicion entre medias fue impresionante
- energia ok
- un gran upperbody que le da fuerza y espresividad a tu walk
YounGun
- el principio no me convencio mucho
- 0:48 - 0:53 lyric (L)
- un video bastante sencillo no me impresiono mucho
- tienes algun que otro movimiento bastante tuyo
- un estilo fluido y limpio
- podias averle dao un poco mas de juego con upperbody
- energia ok
- Variations - Artyfaiz
- Style - artyfaiz/youngun
- Beatriding - Artyfaiz
- Entertainment -Artyfaiz
- Cleanliness/Smoothness - Youngun
vote : artyfaiz (more entertainment/and overal better walk)
darkclowner- Mensajes : 3
Reputación : 0
Fecha de inscripción : 06/10/2010
Re: Artyfaiz vs YonGun
vote darkclowner
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Artyfaiz
- First I love that song ^ ^
- Your first pated following the lyric much I guspo
- Best execution alomejor lacking in some transition
- Wide range of motion any other original k
- The final kneedrop of that transition between means was awesome
- Energy ok
- A great upperbody that gives strength and expressiveness to your walk
YounGun
- The principle is not much convinced me
- 0:48 - 0:53 lyric (L)
- A pretty simple video does not impress me much
- You have any other movement that quite yours
- A fluid style and clean
- You could tap to harm a little game with upperbody
- Energy ok
- Variations - Artyfaiz
- Style - artyfaiz / youngun
- Beatriding - Artyfaiz
- Entertainment-Artyfaiz
- Cleanliness / Smoothness - Youngun
vote: artyfaiz (more entertainment / and overal Better walk)
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Artyfaiz
- First I love that song ^ ^
- Your first pated following the lyric much I guspo
- Best execution alomejor lacking in some transition
- Wide range of motion any other original k
- The final kneedrop of that transition between means was awesome
- Energy ok
- A great upperbody that gives strength and expressiveness to your walk
YounGun
- The principle is not much convinced me
- 0:48 - 0:53 lyric (L)
- A pretty simple video does not impress me much
- You have any other movement that quite yours
- A fluid style and clean
- You could tap to harm a little game with upperbody
- Energy ok
- Variations - Artyfaiz
- Style - artyfaiz / youngun
- Beatriding - Artyfaiz
- Entertainment-Artyfaiz
- Cleanliness / Smoothness - Youngun
vote: artyfaiz (more entertainment / and overal Better walk)
sebb1NN- Mensajes : 270
Reputación : 9
Fecha de inscripción : 22/05/2010
Edad : 28
Localización : Argentina / Chaco / Resistencia
Re: Artyfaiz vs YonGun
Artyfaiz win 3 - 0 K.O
sebb1NN- Mensajes : 270
Reputación : 9
Fecha de inscripción : 22/05/2010
Edad : 28
Localización : Argentina / Chaco / Resistencia
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